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                                                     Forever the Umbreon by RubiiksCube

My first Pokepasta ever so tell me if it's okay or not ... nothing to harsh please

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I rummaged though my DS games to find any game I haven't played in years. I managed to find my SoulSliver Version, I grabbed it and put it into my 3DS. I flipped the DS screen up and turned it on. When the game finally loaded I clicked continue and started my game where I left off, In Goldenrod City. I saw my Umbreon and smiled. Clicking the A button I started talking to him, "Forever welcomes you back, he missed you" the heart icon appeared. I just smiled wider seeing it

I clicked A again "I've waited so long to see you again, master" a happy icon appeared. I looked at the screen with a confused look "Was he talking to me?" I put the question to the back of my head. I wanted to see what other Pokemon I had on my team, so I opened my party and I had Pharaoh my Lucairo, Skyfall the Swablu, Jolt my Pikachu, Mira my Mawile, and of course my favorite Pokemon ever Forever my Umbreon. I don't know why I named him that though. 

Clicking Skyfall I flew to Victory Road and then to Lavender Town, I just felt like going there. I heard Lavender Town Theme and started talking to people. After I moved my sprite to the house of memories and walked in. I walked over to Mr. Fuji and pressed A, what he said was odd "Im sorry for your lost" I gave another questionably look and asked myself , What he mean't. 

I decided to talk to another one of my Pokemon, I opened my party and saw that the five pokemon I had I only had one left, Forever. I closed the party menu and walked over a grave and a text box appeared "Here lies Forever the Umbreon, Who died waiting for his master to return." My blood went alittle cold "How could Forever be dead .... he's in my party" I press A and closed the text. Curious I reopened my party and click Forever's summary. 

What I saw made me go pale, Forever's Sprite looked like a Zombie. He was his normal black colour but his rings were a pale yellow colour, his left paw looked as if it was ripped off and his left ear seemed to be bitten off at the tip. His right ears was torn in places, where the yellow ring should be on his tail was nothing but bone. Forever's eye's were nothing but a cloudy grey colour that seemed to be glowing. I didn't feel any other emotion but regret, It's been about 3 years since I last played the game. I closed it, and left the house of memories. I moved my sprite to the tall grass to see if Forever can still battle, as soon as the battle started it ended quickly but it said the wild Pokemon died. I walked out to the tall grass and another text appeared "No more Pokemon will bother us anymore, I made sure that they'll never get in are way again, So we'll be TOGETHER FOREVER" I closed the text and my DS shut off. 
Tell me if it's alright

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JJBAMortalKombat's avatar
Not bad. The creepypasta is good in my opinion! I seriously love reading Pokemon creepypasta stories (well maybe not only Pokemon but, i also read Laughing Jack and Ben Drowned but i choose Ben Drowned over Jack).